Friday, September 29, 2006

hey people
the english song is finally DONE
yes
thanks for waiting
its my first try wrting an english song
hopes it is nice. or even better
gang have not seen this song yet
normally i will show him first before posting here
but he is nowhere to be seen and i cant wait to post the song
hope u guys like it as much as i like writing it
oh by the way it is suppose to be kind of a "rock" and "high" song
here goes:

oh gosh that girl with the havoc hair

life in school is such a pain
all the girls here look the same
the day is such a bore
either i am sleeping
or not there at all
oh somebody please wake me up
when the school bell rings

then one day
my whole world changed
i start to come to school
every single day....

*rock starts*
oh this girl
the girl with the havoc hair
when i first looked at her
i just cant help but stare
one look at her
and i know that we are a pair


chorus:
oh gosh that girl with the havoc hair
when i look at her face
i know that love is in the air
when she looks this way
i just dont know what to say
oh she is like the sun
she drives the darkest clouds away




the only thing i know about her
is her name
but something tells me
its no longer the same
this time its not just a game

when i see her in the exam hall
(oh someone hold me)
im gonna fall

when i see her walk this way
i just dont know what to do
maybe i will just stand here and act cool
oh please dont think that i am a fool
cause whatever i try to do
is solely for you

i will walk a mile
just to see her smile
it doesnt matter if she doesnt know
it doesnt matter if the story never unfolds



chorus:
oh gosh that girl with the havoc hair
when i look at her face
i know that love is in the air
when she looks this way
i just dont know what to say
oh she is like the sun
she drives the darkest clouds away



i dont know why
but her cutie face
is forever stuck in my mind

but one day
i saw her holding a hand
that is so not mine
with nothing else to say
and with tears in my eyes
i walk away....


---by haoting

hope you guys like it
lets all hope that the last verse of the song
will never come true
*prays*=D


please remember to give comments big or small named or unidentified
comments are greatly appreciated

this song has the exact same title as this blog man
it can be the theme song of this blog already
hmmm maybe *laughs* =D

really hope that this song will turn out to be a real song
wish upon a star!

if you really like this song
it wouldnt hurt to show it to your friends
who knows
we may be able to find a composer this way

to almo: how can this song be about rejection since the guy and the girl dont know each other

i wrote this song for a girl
that girl with the havoc hair=]

---haoting signing off

Comments:
not bad sia.nice attempt.betta than the remake of ur chi song.and the song becomes more special since i noe that GAL too.lol.
 
nice.. finally an eng song.
the lyrics quite good lah..
 
hmz...i haf no comments. thought thelyrics are good, i noe not much abt eng songs to comment, i tink eng songs v diff to grasp..nice try anw.
 
nice try.

you could remove the'oh gosh' from the title 'oh gosh that girl with the havoc hair'.

the lyrics seems to be caught between punk, rock and pop. try to read lyrics of punk songs, rock songs and pop songs to differentiate. maybe it would be better.

overall, its an improvement.

maybe i could try writing an english song too (:

good try anw.
 
as a person who listens to english songs... mostly rock.. i disagree with wee (not alvin wee which is myself).. the "oh gosh" must be included in the chorus... starts the chorus well u see... it makes an entrance into the chorus and pitch and tone wise will be different... hence ppl can differentiate btw chorus and verses..
however the last few parts... doesnt go well with the song... i agree with wee that it doesnt have a fixed genre of song... jumps about here and there.. to me the verses sound like a pop song but chorus sounds like a rock song...
i think the genre u want it to be is punk rock.. since its about girls and rejection and stuff... but to me punk rock played with punk rock style of music doesnt blend...
i would recommend the first verse to be played with a piano only.. second verse starts with some cymbals and maybe hi-hat... then when "every single day" is sung the drums come in... sounds good...
overall to me this song can be played with similar melody by the band "The Fray"...
 
oops i meant "the song played with punk rock style doesnt blend"
 
not rejection lah
more of like
a boy watching from the side
and the girl walks away with another guy
cox the girl dun even noe de guy
lmao
 
erhh hope the ending part of the song is not true tho hahaax
ohh yar ppl THX FOR ALL THE GREAT
COMMENTS
 
personally i think that with the right mix of music this would be a wonderful song (with some touching up perhaps) haha ht i think you got more potential for writing english songs
 
just in case people minsunderstand: i just mean that he writes good english songs
 
then again because u wrote it and when i read it and i imagine ur face when i read it... doesnt really suit leh.. then again maybe the wierdness is because im reading it instead of listening to a song sang out with the lyrics... erm i hope my grammar is correct.. o well.. it sounds alright though.. pretty much like what i would expect u to write GWAHAHA
 
when i mean removing the 'oh gosh', i mean removing it from the title, not the chorus. sorry for the misunderstanding (:
 
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